Monday, June 13, 2011

Petal

Blood
Slipping through my fingers
Like flower petals

Inspired by Carry on Tuesday.
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7 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 13, 2011 at 10:38 PM

    cute,
    bloody smart lines.
    :)

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  2. DavidJune 14, 2011 at 2:17 PM

    8 words painting a vivid picture. Thanks.

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  3. UnknownJune 14, 2011 at 8:46 PM

    So simple yet so great!

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  4. WhitesnakeJune 17, 2011 at 6:58 PM

    simoly brillant

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  5. WhitesnakeJune 17, 2011 at 6:59 PM

    That should have been Simply Brillant....whoops

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  6. AnonymousJune 18, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    Ah, the beginnings of a poetic serial killer. Great verse.

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  7. AliciaJune 19, 2011 at 10:05 PM

    Thank you. I really appreciate all your comments ^.^

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