Sunday, April 3, 2011

Messenger

It's in the sunbeams
Streaming down from the sky
It's in the wild air
Tickling my
Skin touching the cool grass
Thick
It's in the lives of the animals
Nature's limerick

Inspired by Sunday Scribblings.

Problem is fixed! :)
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8 comments:

  1. Jae RoseApril 3, 2011 at 1:06 PM

    Just keep going..the stream of consciousness flows perfectly..keep following the ideas and the full stops will find their place soon enough..Jae :)

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  2. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallApril 3, 2011 at 1:40 PM

    keep going..

    carry faith.

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  3. MERYL JAFFE, PhD - parent, psychologist, teacher, author...April 3, 2011 at 4:50 PM

    I thought you did a really nice job. The capitals help. I am sorry your stream stopped...
    I look forward to more.

    Meryl
    http://departingthetext.blogspot.com

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  4. AliciaApril 3, 2011 at 5:28 PM

    Thanks guys. Means a lot.

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  5. BerowneApril 3, 2011 at 6:31 PM

    Very well written...

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  6. AnonymousApril 4, 2011 at 1:18 AM

    First time reading you, and liked this very much. The stanzas, somewhat askew, added a quirky feeling to this, satisfying and fun.

    Nature's limerick, nice!
    Amy Barlow Liberatore (and here's mine:)
    http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/04/03/message-in-a-bottle-napowrimo-3/

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  7. KateApril 5, 2011 at 10:47 PM

    I like this 'disjointed' bit of loveliness.

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  8. The Solitary WriterApril 7, 2011 at 3:11 AM

    it was indeed a very beautiful write up :) :)

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