Just keep going..the stream of consciousness flows perfectly..keep following the ideas and the full stops will find their place soon enough..Jae :)
keep going..carry faith.
I thought you did a really nice job. The capitals help. I am sorry your stream stopped...I look forward to more.Merylhttp://departingthetext.blogspot.com
Thanks guys. Means a lot.
Very well written...
First time reading you, and liked this very much. The stanzas, somewhat askew, added a quirky feeling to this, satisfying and fun.Nature's limerick, nice!Amy Barlow Liberatore (and here's mine:)http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/04/03/message-in-a-bottle-napowrimo-3/
I like this 'disjointed' bit of loveliness.
it was indeed a very beautiful write up :) :)